So What did you think about my story ?

Ok my Story For you we come on http://www. sciencefictionandbooks.com/  is complete, and I was now wondering what you out there thought of it.
Was it readable, exciting, drab, rubbish what?
Please Please please let me know.
And don't worry about the punctuation I know, but as I have said before "That's what Proof writers are for" and dont think you will upset me I have a pretty thick skin.
Any comment that makes one put pen or in this case fingers to work commenting is a good one.
Regards Clive. and if you havent read it and would like to follow the  link.